· What does the reader need to know about each difficulty/hardship/challenge?

Memoir Analysis: Stealing Buddha’s Dinner

Please write three pages essay which are including intro, 3 body paragraphs and conclusion. Also, please see the essay plan for body structures and follow it carefully.

Some Helpful Grammar for Essay #3 J

Make/let/help
1. Grammar: These verbs are followed by the base verb no matter what tense make/let/help* is.

Rosa made the kids pick up their toys. His boss lets him leave early. I will help you clean up. *help can be followed by infinitive—but it is less common
2. Meaning: These verbs are NOT interchangeable. Causative verbs
Make = force, require, compel let = permit, allow help = assist, make possible

Rosa made the kids ask permission for snacks. His boss never lets him leave before 6:00. Reading helped Bich become a writer.

Affect

Something CANNOT affect someone to do something.

Reading affected Bich to become a writer. Wrong!
Something can affect someone negatively or positively by + gerund
Sheltering in place has affected a lot of people negatively by making them feel depressed.

Become

Do not use an infinitive after become.

Bich became to be a writer.

For example/for instance Try to use this grammar in your essay!!! J These phrases can introduce a word or phrase.
I love all of kinds of dessert, for example chocolate cake, cookies, and ice cream. J
They can also introduce a whole sentence.

Rosa had a lot of rules. For example, the kids had to ask permission for snacks. Notice the punctuation above! How would you punctuate the sentences below.

Bich had many hardships in her life, for instance discrimination and bullying at school.

Noi was very loving with the kids. For example, she always made their favorite food after school.

Children usually have carefree lives. For example, they have no bills to pay or jobs to go to.

Kids need some basic essentials to be happy, for instance the love of parents and a stable home.

Essay #3 Instructions: Part 2: Body Paragraphs Your body paragraphs are due Wed. 4/29 by 10:00 am.

Body paragraphs 1 and 2: difficulties/hardships/challenges in Bich’s childhood
· What does the reader need to know about each difficulty/hardship/challenge?

When it started? Her actions or the actions of others? What did she or others SAY or DO that SHOWS the difficulty? Why was it difficult?

Body paragraphs don’t need a lot of background because that will be in the intro

  • How should each of these paragraphs start?
    The challenge : One of the difficulties she experienced was….topic sentence
  • What kind of sentence should come at the beginning of body paragraph 2? Transition sentence will be a combination of transition and topic sentence

Body paragraph 3 (and 4): the factor(s) that helped Bich succeed even though she faced difficulties/hardships/challenges

What kind of sentence should come at the beginning of body paragraph 3? And 4 if you do a 4th paragraph? Transition sentence will be a combination of transition and topic sentence

Combine The 2 challenges and bridge to factor that helped

  • What does the reader need to know about this factor?
    Why/how it helped? What were the benefits? When? Details to SHOW the factor in action Why she needed this factor in her life?

Additional Instructions for Essay #3 Body Paragraphs

  • · Please try to get in at least TWO quotes FROM the memoir with proper attribution, citation, and punctuation. You must have 3 in the final Revision.
  • · Check VERB TENSE consistency:
    Reading was very important to Bich, and it helps helped her a lot Wrong! Rosa made the kids ask for permission for snacks, and Bich really hates hated that. Wrong!

 

 

REQUIREMENTS

3 pages, Double Spacing UCLA

 

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