Need Editing for an argument essay

Need Editing for an argument essay

I need editing on:

1- Grammer.

2- Sentence Structure.

3- Overall “Complex & Compound sentences that explain research with the correct idea.

4- Word Choice.

5- Clear Sentences.

Preview of the Answer……

Humans often receive massive technology shifts with fear and anxiety. When people did not understand the computers, they felt threatened to be replaced by these machines and computer phobias, a range of fears and anxieties, were suddenly everywhere. Again, people are feeling threatened by another massive technology shift. Personal computers have been prevalent for over forty years, since the 1970s, and many new features have been updated over the years. In early years of the computer revolution, most companies and individuals relied on a shared………………………

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