Software Security Revision
I reviewed the work and here are my comments:
1- introduction need to be about security in general and then about the importance of securing OS and then softwares/applications
2- You need to add small paragraph after the first title and before the word “Compatibility”
3- The network access section is not related to the securing the application. Therefore, you need to revisit and just as required.
4- all paragraphs except the intro and conclusion should have some citation
Please you need to fulfill the requirements. Therefore, you need to write the full 4 pages and more original and analysis is required.
please incorporate my comments to the work and send it back to me for review.
APA 1280 words