THESIS ABOUT THE EDUCATION SYSTEM
THESIS ABOUT THE EDUCATION SYSTEM
CONTENT: Your work is an article analysis, but that’s not what I’m looking for. I want you to find an argument that the two authors are addressing and discuss that in the essay. You need to have your own thesis. I cannot stress this enough. YOU NEED YOUR OWN THESIS ABOUT THE EDUCATION SYSTEM. the effectiveness of the education system is too general. I need something more specific like: “something” in the system is not working or not effective, then you use the two articles to support your claim. This means you’ll have to rewrite a large portion of the essay. You can keep the similarities and differences and if you think something is useful or connected to your thesis you can keep that as well. Again the most important thing that I’m looking for is a making your own thesis statement and it needs to be a clear sentence in the intro. Thank you.