What exactly is Morris doing to evoke pathos, for example–that is that strategy. Try to stay grounded in specifics rather than generalizations.
Essay 124- Final Paper
This should be the transition and first body paragraph for the “The Thin Blue Line” 6 pages essay.
The transition to “The Postmodern Challenge” and first paragraph explaining one of Sherwin’s complicating elements. Your transition paragraph should:
- Transition from Morris to Sherwin.
- Introduce Richard Sherwin and “The Postmodern Challenge.”
- Define the postmodern challenge.
Each of the following three paragraphs explaining Sherwin’s acausal/nonlinear complications should:
- Focus on one of the complicating elements.
- Offer a brief example from “The Postmodern Challenge.”
- Explain how the element complicates the case for Randall Adams’s innocence.
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REQUIREMENTS
Grossmont College
English
As I stated, this the transition and the first body paragraph for the essay. You already did the introduction paragraph two weeks ago, and the with the two more strategies last week. Do you want me to send you my professor’s feedback on them?
Introduction Feedback: A good start but I don’t get a clear sense in the intro of your focus. I don’t think you’ve announced a thesis yet. For your first body paragraph, you’re lost the focus. Remember, I would recommend not to introduce Sherwin’s “The Postmodern Challenge” until the second part of the paper. The first part of the paper is just to work with Morris’s rhetorical strategies. Take a look at the sample paper for a better sense of what you should be doing.
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Two Rhetorical Strategies: A great start, but in the first paragraph try to slow down and lead readers more carefully through the sequence of scenes. In the second paragraph, identifying “logos” and “pathos” as strategies don’t really say much. What exactly is Morris doing to evoke pathos, for example–that is that strategy. Try to stay grounded in specifics rather than generalizations.
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I’m going to send you the Essay’s Instructions and PostModern Challenge Pages.
In case you need to watch the film again.
Part 1: https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x3h2rf6
Part 2: https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x3h2rbc
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