You need to clearly define what your project is and why you feel this will improve patient care.

You need to clearly define what your project is and why you feel this will improve patient care.

correct and rewrite. Instructor Feedback: “You have some good information in your paper. You need to clearly define what your project is and why you feel this will improve patient care. This needs to be done at the beginning and be quite specific.

The rest of the paper needs to have a “convince me” approach. Essentially, this is a sales pitch for why this project will improve patient care in your facility and look at potential challenges and solutions.

Please review the attached paper for more information.

Be sure you review APA, grammar etc. The writing center would be a good idea.”